Age/Gender: 32, Female
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Job: werewolf
There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy. - Þig ég trega manna mest / Mædd af táraflóði / Ó, að við hefðum aldrei sést / Elsku vinurinn góði. - Proud to be a werewolf.
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I'm positively surprised! I usually don't expect much when people say that something is their first flash, but this was very nice. The graphics and animation were quite basic, of course, but not sloppily done for the most part; it was quite atmospheric, and the music was fitting.
Things I'd change:
* the final animation where the creature rips its hunter's head off did look sloppy - might be an idea to change that and rework it a bit.
* the music shouldn't stop suddenly.
* the story didn't come to a conclusion; there should, at least, be a trailer of sorts where the effects of the mission's failure are shown.
* there were unnecessary typos (such as "headquaters") that a spellchecker would've caught.
Nevertheless, I'll say that given that this was your first flash, I think you have a nice career in front of you, and I'll look forward to your future flashes. :)
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Goodness, this is *extremely* addictive! I already wasted more than an hour on this without even noticing... ;)
Very well done! You should definitely get daily feature, IMO.
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Brilliant. :D
Author's Response:
Why thank you kind sir... but you must be more specific, lad. Extrapolate on why it was good and why it was bad. I CRAVE FEEDBACK DAMMIT!
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That was very nice indeed - easily the best submission I've seen today, by a large margin. It's not quite on the level of Adam Phillips yet - but then, what is? :) I hope you'll win daily feature for this, because you sure deserve it.
The only thing that you definitely need to work on is the white stripe that occasionally shows at the top of bottom of the screen.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much i am a huge fan of adam but, i surely can't be compared to him esspecial since he's a gd 20 years older than i am
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Quite nice! I've got to admit I'm a bit stuck in level 99 right now, though...
Author's Response:
Right click and press forward :D
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Interesting - I wonder whether this could be used for hypnosis.
Author's Response:
It'd be pretty cool if it could XD
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Nifty! Just a bit short, and the last level where the spheres moved seemed a bit out of place. Get rid of that and add a couple of hundreds of regular levels instead, and you'll have a definite winner. :D
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I never get tired of these. :) However, it'd be nice if the song actually looped.
Author's Response:
It doesn't? :O
I'll sort that out then, it's supposed to.
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Interesting - I wonder whether there's any deeper political meaning in the fact that apparently, the best strategy is to act as quickly as possible without thinking too much. :)
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*snerk* Oh my, that was wonderful. I hope there'll be more Hairy Hotdog movies in the future!
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